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Dec 30, 2005 17:45:27 GMT -8
Post by darthdodo on Dec 30, 2005 17:45:27 GMT -8
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Sept 5, 2006 10:24:36 GMT -8
Post by Kit Nova on Sept 5, 2006 10:24:36 GMT -8
X-9 paces along the balcony, waiting for his transmission to go through.
<<"Yes, X-9.">>
"Inform Him that I have found a weapons stash here on Mustafar. It is very old. These models come up in my database as being used back during the Clone Wars. Let him know that they are in perfect working condition. At least for what he needs them for."
<<"Efficient, X-9. 4-Lug out.">>
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Dec 29, 2006 10:53:52 GMT -8
Post by Lock on Dec 29, 2006 10:53:52 GMT -8
A large City of Tents are seen as the Miners are lead to there quarters, each tent a list of men are made and read off as they are sorted into there perspective tents.
A while later the Large Man seen earlier gets to the front of the line as the guard reads off "Lock?"
Lock nods as the guard looks up in astonishment "They said you boys were big....no kiddin..." Nervous he looks down again "your T-tent number is 3-38, N-n-next"
Lock turns adn walks along the City of Tents finally making to his own, the doors already open he steps inside
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Dec 29, 2006 11:05:45 GMT -8
Post by Lock on Dec 29, 2006 11:05:45 GMT -8
Lock steps inside to see two other men in the tent making there beds on the hard floor, one a skinny man, couldn't be passed 19, Fresh meat always called when they first started working the mines. curious how he got on this trip, when he entered the lotter back on Apatros he new it was rigged, only taking the men strong enough or well trusted, there was a curious twitch about him. real twitchy...
As he looks on to the other man he looks back and speaks
"Bunk boy?"
Raspy Voice, old...warn, screaming over the Jacks for years takes your vocals for a spin Lock replys
"Got room?"
Showing a space next to him Lock starts his bed as Three others enter the tent in due time all making there beds in simillar fashion
The built in comm activates "A men report outside tent, single line now"
"What is it now?" The skinny one asks
"There makin sure they know your face...just in case" They start to get up and the other three men start outside
"In case of what?"
As the old man steps out he replys "Just in case you try to escape, they know your face so they can slot ya easy, no mistakes"
They step outside as the kid swallows hard
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Dec 29, 2006 11:14:15 GMT -8
Post by Lock on Dec 29, 2006 11:14:15 GMT -8
They step outside to a shining light of a Makeshift Guard tower, Guards with Checklists going from tent to tent checking off which is which and taking photos of them individually
Lock and Tent mates form the single line, ready for inspection
A guard calls up
"Lock?"
Lock nods as he takes his Photo
"Feylong"
The old man nods as his photo is alos taken
"Frenen?"
The young boy nods. photo taken Frenen is shaking noticibly
"You Cold boy?"
He Shakes his head
"No sir"
"Nervous?"
"Yes sir"
"Good, keep it that way..."
The Guard makes an evil grin as he moves on to the other men
Lock Leans over to Feylong "Whats his Angle, the boy i mean"
Staying silent as death Feylong keeps steady as the inspection is concluded, they return to there tents
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Dec 29, 2006 12:04:26 GMT -8
Post by Lock on Dec 29, 2006 12:04:26 GMT -8
Entering the tents they hit there Beds as the Order comes in on Comm
"Lights out!"
Only the Guard spot lights and Helmet lamps can be seen as Lock and his mates hit rest getting ready for the next day
>>Hours later<<
"No!! NO!! Mommy Mommy"
A rumble as Stone and machinery come down on the miners, a young boy is seen hitting the walls of the rock contained in the cave in
His father kneeling in behind him as he continues the screams of his dying mother can be heard from under the rubble...
"Mommy Please" He turns and runs to his father "Get up, help me please i'm not strong enough to lift the stone alone"
Tugging on his father proved futile as his father was stricken and emotionless, Turning back The boy runs to the stone again and trys to lift it but fails
Screaming and crying the boy trys hard to lift the stones and in the last bit of strength he stops and falls crying in his own arms "I'm not strong enough..."
Then there was a Shake and Lock awakes
He sits up, its still night...
"What is that?"
He feels somethings wrong, he stands and goes to the comm and turns it on
"Lock, 3-38, Goin to the fresher"
"Copy"
The door breaks seal as Lock steps outside
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Dec 29, 2006 12:07:28 GMT -8
Post by Lock on Dec 29, 2006 12:07:28 GMT -8
Lock steps outside, walking toward the fresher he notices a line
"Great...."
He steps in line only to get a worse feeling, he looks around, being on the corner of the balconys he can see over into the endless lava fields, seeing nothing he shrugs the chill and thinks to himself
"Somethings up..."
He waits in line for the Fresher
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Dec 29, 2006 12:07:31 GMT -8
Post by Kit Nova on Dec 29, 2006 12:07:31 GMT -8
I the darkness on the far edge of the canyon stands a magnaguard hidden in the shadows. Behind him are two probes weighed down with explosives along with a detachment of battle droids. "Wait for my signal."
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Dec 29, 2006 12:10:33 GMT -8
Post by Lock on Dec 29, 2006 12:10:33 GMT -8
Finally getting in he sits on the fresher, looks around and finds a Piece of flimsi with the local reports apon it
he starts to read adn looks up and feels a faint sense of danger
He puts it down and gets out, heading back to his Tent he stops outside andlooks around
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Dec 29, 2006 12:15:53 GMT -8
Post by Kit Nova on Dec 29, 2006 12:15:53 GMT -8
The probes jetison up into the air, coming down inside the camp. They hover towards heavily populated areas as the squad of droids move to the upper cliffs, changing their blasters to long range rifles. X-9 waits of a hoverboard to cross the ravine and attack. "Open fire."
The probes explode over the crucial supports to the balcony, threatening to make the entire camp fall into the lava. One single support remains in the center. There are droids placing charges below.
The squad of snipers above start raining fire down on the unsuspecting camp.
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Dec 29, 2006 12:18:16 GMT -8
Post by Lock on Dec 29, 2006 12:18:16 GMT -8
Lock falls to the Ground as the Charges go off
"What the!!"
The guards near by hit the ground as there face shields shatter from blaster fire
"Oh sh.." he runs for cover as blaster from the main building starts at the cliffs
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Dec 29, 2006 12:21:23 GMT -8
Post by Kit Nova on Dec 29, 2006 12:21:23 GMT -8
One of the snipers takes a hit in the head and slumps over the side of the canyon, falling down into the river of lava.
X-9 blasts towards the balcony on the board, igniting his electrostaff.
The droids below set their charges and run for the far cliffs. [T-25. . .]
X-9 makes hard contact with the mining personel, bashing a guard in the face with the staff.
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Dec 29, 2006 17:25:11 GMT -8
Post by Lock on Dec 29, 2006 17:25:11 GMT -8
Lock Ducks under an overturned vehicle an watchs as the guards fire back at these droids that seemed to have come out of nothingness
Bodys falling Lock watchs as the Captain runs over to the cover with Lock
"Miner, pick up a weapon"
"Give me your Pistol"
The Captain does so an as he turns to fire at the droids he holds the pistol to the Captains head
"Rifle now"
"Your not gonna get..." Lock fires a round through his temple
"I told you" Lock picks up his rifle and keeps covered making his way to the landing pads
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